Help!

By February 14, 2006, any UWO English students wishing to take Creative Writing in the 2006-2007 Fall/Winter academic year have to submit a manuscript of approximately five pages to demonstrate their writing abilities. Can you see where this is going? I hope so...Last year I applied and was utterly rejected. My poor broken heart...but here we are again, and I'm not about to let the date pass without some kind of attempt--half-ass or fully-dedicated--it makes little difference. There are only twenty-four places in total, and then a waiting list of about twelve places. So, it's pretty competitive. Now, I'm not going to lie--I have no intention of stretching myself to suit the prof and torturing myself to get accepted into this course. However, I think that if I can get in on my own merits I might really enjoy it. Here's where you come in: I need help choosing a few things to submit. All I really want is some direction; tell me what you like or what you hate, specifically or generally and I will be exceptionally stoic about it. I think this blog allows anonymous posts, but if not I won't chase you down and make you explain yourself, I promise. That's all I want--just a little advice. If you would rather send me an email or talk to me about this on MSN I'm up for that too. Use the email in my profile though because my hotmail account is a pain in my butt. Can you do that for me? I would really appreciate it. Otherwise I'll be more aggressive and you all know how annoying I can be when I put my mind to it. PS there are a few other things still posted on the site I was using for this. They definitely allow anonymous reviews...or at least I think they used to. So if that suits your purpose a little better I can dig up the URL. If you are feeling really adventurous make up an identity and get yourself a free account. Only to meet my ends though, okay? Thanks. I love you all as much as I love cake.